Critique Corner - Money Where My Mouth Is

 
Hall/Perdue
 
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Hall/Perdue
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06 January 2008 17:01
 

Ok folks,

As I had mentioned, I feel that feedback is an important part of the learning process, and that the critique is the mechanism for promoting honest feedback.

I have been messing around with this emblazonment for quite some time now, and I still don’t feel like I’ve got it just right.  Perhaps it is the absence of a crest and motto.  Perhaps the mantle should be shaded and highlighted to show the dynamic nature of cloth.  Perhaps the roundness would be better suited to the arms of another person.

 

I open myself to your criticism, suggestions, and questions.  If you have new devices to suggest…lay them on me.

 

For reference my crest is A rose between a pair of wings proper, and my motto is Vise a la fin.

 

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Dcgb7f
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06 January 2008 18:00
 

In my opinion, it’s the mantling’s fault. The rest looks intersting, especially the fluid looking helm. Perhaps, if it didn’t look so much like a shield and helm pasted on top of a ying yang…