Ref "Coat of Arms First Draft"

 
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17 January 2008 15:11
 

Upon the recommendation of another one of our members, I am opening a thread in the members area to explain a bit, some of my questions may be confusing some of the members based on the surname listed in my profile.

A brief explanation smile  I am also open to tincture recommendations (or any other thought you may have).

 

Oh - a question also - in the blazon below, if the charges and Ordinary are the same color, is it correct to list the tincture last as "all argent" or is it better heraldry to list the tincture after the ordinary and "of the last" be placed after the charges?

 

*Rose main with elephant as crest ideas -

 

Gules, on a chevron, between three roses barbed and seeded all Argent

 

Gules, dexter tierce, per pale 3 roses barbed and seeded all Argent

 

*Elephant w/ tower main with Rose as crest ideas -

 

Gules, an elephant statant bearing on it’s back a tower all proper, within a bordure Argent

 

Gules, an elephant statant bearing on it’s back a tower all proper, in chief two barrulets Argent

 

If any of the above are current or known COA either base or design, please let me know so that I can remove them.  They are completely unintentional.

 

Respectfully,

Terry

 
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17 January 2008 20:18
 

I know my blazon is not very good, so I have attempted to due images of what I am trying to refer too.  I know…it is clipartish

Gules, on a chevron, between three roses barbed and seeded all Argent

 

http://omega1.us/personal/chev-coat.jpg

 

Gules, dexter tierce, per pale 3 roses barbed and seeded all Argent

 

http://omega1.us/personal/tiercegif.gif

 

Gules, an elephant statant bearing on it’s back a tower all proper, within a bordure Argent

 

http://omega1.us/personal/Bordure.jpg

 

Gules, an elephant statant bearing on it’s back a tower all proper, in chief two barrulets Argent

 

http://omega1.us/personal/barrulets.jpg

 
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17 January 2008 20:35
 

Wow, Terry. Quite a bit to look at here.

1. Gules on a chevron between three roses Argent barbed and seeded proper. It’s a fairly good bet that this one has been used elsewhere and by someone quite prominent.

 

2. Gules a dexter tierce per pale 3 roses Argent barbed and seeded proper.  This is different. And if the roses are per pale, then they will be in the center of the shield, I think, not in the center of the Gules portion (and in my opinion that will also give it a little more balance).

 

3. Gules an elephant statant bearing on it’s back a tower proper within a bordure Argent. Why the bordure? You know, a bordure is so tied in most heraldists minds with Scottish differencing that you may spend a lot of time explaining it. Unless it is Scottish cadency or you have a really powerful reason for wanting a bordure ...

 

4. Gules an elephant statant bearing on it’s back a tower proper bars gemel enhanced Argent . This is striking, interesting and in all probability unique.

 

Your use of the word ‘all’ is superfluous here, I think. We read until we get to a color. Everything from the last color to the next one is the same. I’ve changed your blazons to reflect what I believe to be better, but there are those much more adept at blazon than I who will chime in.

 
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17 January 2008 21:00
 

Hi Patrick,

Thank you for your feedback.  Yeah, kind of a lot to look at here, I have been busy.  smile

 

I also think the 4th one is unique also.  It has a way of kind of standing out…well, at least to me.

 

Respectfully,

Terry

 
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17 January 2008 21:03
 

Bars gemel are two barrulets set in close proximity. Enhanced moves them up to the top of the field.

 
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17 January 2008 21:13
 

The first coat you presented made me think of Duncan almost immediately.

I like the second one, to me at least it has a better feel.  More true to very simplistic heraldry IMO (and that’s a good thing).

 
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17 January 2008 21:26
 

Gules, an elephant statant bearing on it’s back a tower all proper, within a bordure Argent

I do not understand the point of the border, are you the second son or are you the representative of a cadet branch of your family. In British, Irish and French heraldry have specific meanings as they often do in Spanish and Portuguese heraldry.

 

The barrulets on the next version of the elephant arms reminds me of the shoulder insignia of a US Navy Leiutenant.

 

If the elephant is Proper does this mean that it is greyish as would be the tower? Why is the caparision not blazoned Azure? I am certain that the elephant and tower combination can be coloured in a manner that will be unique, thus making the need to clutter up the field with a border or barrulets pointless.

 
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17 January 2008 21:43
 

Maybe I missed it somewhere, but as a member of the Chequey club, why did you choose to remove them?

I certainly think they could be added to option 2 (and if you don’t want blue and white, black and white or blue and gold would look nice as well)

 

I certainly like the roses in the center with the tierced shield though

 
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17 January 2008 22:09
 

Of the proposed designs, I think I like best the one with the dexter tierce and the three roses centered. I believe, however, that they should be blazoned as "in pale" rather than "per pale." "Per pale" designates a vertical division; "in pale" a vertical arrangement.

While the dexter tierce is interesting, it does seem a bit bland and "inexplicable." One thought that crossed my mind was to make the tierce checky Or and Vert, picking up the accent colors of the roses ("barbed and seeded proper" means "barbed Vert and seeded Or").

 

Another thought was to place the roses on the tierce. Perhaps: Checky Or and Vert on a dexter tierce Gules three roses Argent barbed and seeded proper.

 

In any of these, I’d consider using the elephant in the crest with a checky caparison.

 
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17 January 2008 22:18
 

Terry,

What about combining many of your above elements into something uniquely yours, but aesthetically pleasing such as:

Gules a chevron chequey Argent and Azure fimbriated Or between in chief two roses Argent barbed Vert and seeded Or and in base a an elephant statant bearing on it’s back a tower Argent and caparisioned Azure

The chevron chequey Ar. and Az. fimbriated Or would leave the Or and checks of the Stuarts.  The roses in cheif and the elephant in base would balance each other out.  The chevron would leave room for the tower on the elephant’s back that any other charge would not.

 

Just my 2ยข.

 

Take care,

 

 
 
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17 January 2008 22:20
 

I like 2 & 4, so may I suggest a combination?

Gules 3 roses in pale Argent barber and seeded proper; a dexter tierce barry of six Argent and Gules

 

or

 

Gules 3 roses in pale Argent barber and seeded proper; a dexter tierce Gules charged with 3 bars Argent

 
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17 January 2008 23:58
 

Terry;53284 wrote:

http://omega1.us/personal/tierce.gif

 


As a fan of symmetry, I see this and wonder why not the following?

 

Argent, on a pale Gules three roses of the field, barbed and seeded proper.

 

Had my laptop not perished, I would have thrown together a clipart version of the arms.

 
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18 January 2008 11:16
 

The tierce is definitely distinctive.  But it seems that without a compelling reason for it (some family history of being right-brained or right-winged or having an ancestor who fought on the right bank of the Seine or what not), a one-sided tierce is immediately off-putting.  I like that it’s different, but without explanation it may be more off-putting than you want…

The pale might be a good solution in terms of that but of course it immediately strikes the different-ness of the tierce.  I guess it’s a catch-22.  You can be pretty sure it’s unique and different that way, but it might be *too* unique.  If there was a good story to match it it would be perfect, though!

 

Thoughts, probably not useful ones.

 

Any other unique assymmetrical divisions out there not often/never seen?

 

Kyle=

 
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18 January 2008 13:12
 

What about using flauches?

 
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18 January 2008 13:36
 

Kyle MacLea;53318 wrote:

... a one-sided tierce is immediately off-putting.  I like that it’s different, but without explanation it may be more off-putting than you want…


I would have to respectfully disagree.  I personally don’t find asymmetry in any way visually displeasing, or off-putting.  It’s also sure to avoid duplication of a fairly simple design.

 

The more I think about the blazon of this, I think if you want the flowers in the middle, rather than off to the side (like in your first rendition), it might be best to be more explicit.

 

Gules a dexter tierce Argent, over all three roses in pale Argent barbed and seeded proper

 

I also still like:

 

Gules a dexter tierce Gules charged with three (or two) bars Argent, over all three roses in pale Argent barbed and seeded proper

 

I’ll try to post a visual of this tonight.

 
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18 January 2008 14:04
 

Gotta say, I like this one quite a bit.

http://i225.photobucket.com/albums/dd4/w3r3wolv3s/terry.gif