Emblazonment Work in Progress

 
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21 March 2013 17:59
 

I’ll label this a work in progress even though just prior to this I thought I was finished.  As it turns out, I am not very pleased with the helm, mantling and crest I had created.  I was trying something different with a somewhat more barbaric helm and forgoing a torse in favor of having my crest look more like a wolfs head and pelt.  I think where I went wrong was having the "pelt" end and transition into a more traditional cloth mantling.  It seemed to be alright as a black and white vector drawing but once I colored it up, I just wasn’t pleased with the result.  What I am fairly pleased with is the shield and motto scroll.  I’ll present those now.

http://www.thesupertribe.com/images/MJSmithCoA-Shield.png

 

I’ll keep working on the rest and update this once I am confident that its finished.

 
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21 March 2013 18:29
 

I really like this!

 
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21 March 2013 22:57
 

On the whole, I think it’s a nice effort. The major criticisms I have: 1) I am not a fan of the rather modern "diapering" you’ve chosen and 2) I think the entire wolf’s head ought to be in the dexter half of the shield.

 
 
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22 March 2013 10:12
 

not sure about the Latin

"Ad Destinatum Persequere Ad Bravium" = "Press Toward the Mark for the Prize" ?

 
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22 March 2013 11:51
 

Kenneth Mansfield;98061 wrote:

On the whole, I think it’s a nice effort. The major criticisms I have: 1) I am not a fan of the rather modern "diapering" you’ve chosen and 2) I think the entire wolf’s head ought to be in the dexter half of the shield.


I do see your point about the wolfs head.  The diapering is just something I was experimenting with.  Wolf’s teeth for the main portion and feathers in chief.


steven harris;98062 wrote:

not sure about the Latin

"Ad Destinatum Persequere Ad Bravium" = "Press Toward the Mark for the Prize" ?


That is correct.

 
J. Stolarz
 
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25 March 2013 20:46
 

Overall I like it, and I kind of like the "modern" diapering.

 
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31 March 2013 04:27
 

Having trouble sleeping so I decided to move this along some more.  Here is my latest attempt.  Comments and critiques are always welcome.

http://www.thesupertribe.com/images/MJSmithCoA.png

 
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31 March 2013 15:57
 

I like this one a lot.  I really like the mantling that you used.

 
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01 April 2013 23:00
 

Yes, I agree. Very nice

 
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02 April 2013 22:22
 

I like the diapering a lot smile